Review Swaps?

Hello, I am looking to do a few review swaps. Four chapters for four chapters. Or however we agree to do it.

Sure!

Hi Pens&Keys

I'd be happy to swap reviews - story for story! Let me know if you're interested.

My apologizes I am only just now seeing this.

If you are still available so am I

Your story is completed?

Yes. My story is completed. It's in the January Challenge: Gold Bug Resolution. Please check it out. Review stars and feedback comments gratefully received.

Which story of yours would you like feedback on?

I can give you overall content feedback - commenting on the big picture and the general shape of the story. I usually do this publicly when I give your story review stars.

I can also give you a line edit feedback - noting typos, grammar and punctuation issues, and also highlighting. good/effective phrases you've used. I prefer to do this nitty-gritty feedback more privately in a discussion thread.

Let me know what kind of feedback you'd like on the story you want me to look at.

I believe 'I can give you overall content feedback - commenting on the big picture and the general shape of the story.' Is very important for me right now. My story is "Alucard St.Vincent."

I can do the same for your story as well.