Review Swaps?

Hello, I am looking to do a few review swaps. Four chapters for four chapters. Or however we agree to do it.

Sure!

Hi Pens&Keys

I'd be happy to swap reviews - story for story! Let me know if you're interested.

My apologizes I am only just now seeing this.

If you are still available so am I

Your story is completed?

Yes. My story is completed. It's in the January Challenge: Gold Bug Resolution. Please check it out. Review stars and feedback comments gratefully received.

Which story of yours would you like feedback on?

I can give you overall content feedback - commenting on the big picture and the general shape of the story. I usually do this publicly when I give your story review stars.

I can also give you a line edit feedback - noting typos, grammar and punctuation issues, and also highlighting. good/effective phrases you've used. I prefer to do this nitty-gritty feedback more privately in a discussion thread.

Let me know what kind of feedback you'd like on the story you want me to look at.

I believe 'I can give you overall content feedback - commenting on the big picture and the general shape of the story.' Is very important for me right now. My story is "Alucard St.Vincent."

I can do the same for your story as well.

Hi there,

I have given you a general review of Chapter 1 of your story 'Alucard St. Vincent'. I hope you find my comments thought-provoking but useful. I did notice some typos and punctuation mistakes along the way, which I would personally recommend weeding out. (It's the first impression a reader gets of you, after all!) However, as you requested, I have not commented on those but offered you instead just a content edit.

Please do take a look at 'Gold Bug Resolution' and give me a review/some comments on it. After you've done that, if you like, I can have a look at Chapter 2 of Alucard St. Vincent (or Lucarda San Genaro)! I'm intrigued to see how your story develops.