The purple scrap of Emily’s scarf clung to the branch like a tiny, tattered flag. A beacon of hope amid the thickening dread. I pushed forward, parting the wet leaves as they clung to my sleeves with chilling insistence.
The fog thickened with every step. My world shrank to the narrow beam of my flashlight and beyond that, nothing but silence. Not the calm, gentle hush of a forest at rest, but something deeper. Intentional. Hollow. My own heartbeat sounded deafening in my ears, thumping hard enough to crack the hush.
It started subtly. A tremor beneath my boots. I told myself it was just my own nerves but then it came again. Deeper. A growl, long and slow, that vibrated through the ground like the forest itself was warning me. Not the sound of an animal. This felt… deliberate.
I froze.
The silence afterward was heavier somehow. No birds. No wind. Just that memory of a sound still echoing in my spine. My body strained for input ears sharp, breath shallow. My grip on the flashlight tightened until it hurt.
Every small noise took on a monstrous tone. The rustle of leaves became the whisper of something brushing past. Each twig beneath my boots snapped like a gunshot. I imagined eyes behind every tree, watching through the veil of white.
Then the forest answered.
A screech tore through the air high-pitched and brief. Then scrabbling. Something dragged itself across the forest floor. I swung the flashlight wildly. Shadows. Fog. Nothing. The screech dissolved into the rhythmic drip of water from above. Each drop slammed like a drumbeat. My pulse was racing.
I moved faster, reckless now.
The growls came again. Closer. Paired with wet rustling and the scrape of something heavy against bark. They circled. Teased. Followed. My flashlight lit only fragments half-trees, broken stumps, leering roots.
And then I fell.
One step too far. A hidden root caught my foot, and I hit the ground hard, the flashlight skittering into the dark.
Blind.
Alone.
Drenched in the suffocating silence.
I clawed for the light. My fingers brushed something cold. For a breathless moment, I swore I’d touched a face.
But it was just a tree root gnarled, slick with dew. My breath came in ragged gasps. I forced myself upright, hands shaking, chest heaving. I found the flashlight, the beam shaking wildly in my trembling hand.
Still, the sounds danced just beyond its reach.
More rustling. A thud against wood. A whimper. Faint. Broken. Human?
My hand flew to my mouth. My throat tightened. Could it be her? Could it be Emily?
I followed the sound.
The whimpers came in pulses growing closer, each one threading hope and terror tighter together. I pushed through the fog, through tangled brush and clawing branches. The path vanished entirely. The trees pressed in. The fog thickened like it wanted me to stop.
But then I broke through.
A clearing emerged. The fog lifted slightly, revealing a single twisted oak at its center, its limbs gnarled like grasping hands. Beneath it, huddled and trembling, was not a girl.
It was a fox cub.
Tiny. Hurt. Its leg was caught in a snare, the rusted wire biting deep. Its cries were weak now. The other sounds the growls, the scraping, the distant thuds—they’d all come from the forest reacting to this.
Not a monster.
Just a creature in pain.
Relief flooded me like warm water. I dropped to my knees, shaking from the weight of it all. The forest’s chaos hadn’t been personal. Not yet. It was just wildness. Desperation. Life trying to survive.
I examined the wound. It was too deep. Too far gone for me to help with bare hands.
But I would come back. I would get help.
I rose again.
The fear hadn’t vanished. But it had changed. Muted. Replaced by something sharper. Determination. Emily was still out there. And now, the forest no longer felt like a cursed void it felt like a world trying to speak.
So I kept walking, ready to listen.
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Every small noise took on a monstrous tone. The rustle of leaves became the whisper of something brushing past. Each twig beneath my boots snapped like a gunshot. I imagined eyes behind every tree, watching through the veil of white.
Then the forest answered.
A screech tore through the air high-pitched and brief. Then scrabbling. Something dragged itself across the forest floor. I swung the flashlight wildly. Shadows. Fog. Nothing. The screech dissolved into the rhythmic drip of water from above. Each drop slammed like a drumbeat. My pulse was racing.
I moved faster, reckless now.
The growls came again. Closer. Paired with wet rustling and the scrape of something heavy against bark. They circled. Teased. Followed. My flashlight lit only fragments half-trees, broken stumps, leering roots.
And then I fell.
One step too far. A hidden root caught my foot, and I hit the ground hard, the flashlight skittering into the dark.
Blind.
Alone.
Drenched in the suffocating silence.
I clawed for the light. My fingers brushed something cold. For a breathless moment, I swore I’d touched a face.
But it was just a tree root gnarled, slick with dew. My breath came in ragged gasps. I forced myself upright, hands shaking, chest heaving. I found the flashlight, the beam shaking wildly in my trembling hand.
Still, the sounds danced just beyond its reach.
More rustling. A thud against wood. A whimper. Faint. Broken. Human?
My hand flew to my mouth. My throat tightened. Could it be her? Could it be Emily?
I followed the sound.
The whimpers came in pulses growing closer, each one threading hope and terror tighter together. I pushed through the fog, through tangled brush and clawing branches. The path vanished entirely. The trees pressed in. The fog thickened like it wanted me to stop.
But then I broke through.
A clearing emerged. The fog lifted slightly, revealing a single twisted oak at its center, its limbs gnarled like grasping hands. Beneath it, huddled and trembling, was not a girl.
It was a fox cub.
Tiny. Hurt. Its leg was caught in a snare, the rusted wire biting deep. Its cries were weak now. The other sounds the growls, the scraping, the distant thuds they’d all come from the forest reacting to this.
Not a monster.
Just a creature in pain.
Relief flooded me like warm water. I dropped to my knees, shaking from the weight of it all. The forest’s chaos hadn’t been personal. Not yet. It was just wildness. Desperation. Life trying to survive.
I examined the wound. It was too deep. Too far gone for me to help with bare hands.
But I would come back. I would get help.
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