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Eden Eternia

Chapter One: Awakening

Chapter Two: The Rebel

Chapter Three: Heavith

Chapter Four: The Visit

Chapter Five: The Adoption

Chapter Six: The Plan

Chapter Seven: The Weapon Of Destruction

Chapter Eight: The Dragon lands

Chapter Nine: A Testament to Love

Chapter Ten: The Bond

Chapter 11: Into Madness

Chapter 12: Duty

Chapter 13: The confession

Chapter 14: Emptiness

Chapter 15: The Search

Chapter 16: An Answer

Chapter 17: The Blindness

Chapter 18: The Commitment

Chapter 19: Keita’s Brilliant Plan

Chapter 20: The Binding Ritual

Chapter 21: A Change In Plans

Chapter 22: At Kisira’s

Chapter 23: Preparations

Chapter 24: The Attack

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Hi,
the story is nice. I would have put a male character (brother, better son). That kind of "Special forces" confrontation looks odd done by a woman. And the cryptic clues do not make any contribution to the plot. For example, "Gnomes have teeth" may lead to a key hidden in a gnome with teeth, or the name of the gnome with teeth in her sketches may be a password. Something like that.
I like the flow of the story and the descriptions, short but catchy.
It's no easy job to describe a physical confrontation. I'm jealous.
 I'm sure this is a short story, a longer one would be totally logic.
Best wishes for your career.
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