September challenge short story

It's finally out! it took a while and it took a lot of brainstorming but I finally finished it

I hope that whoever reads it enjoys it and I would love to receive comments on it :D

I LOVED ITT!!! mine was defo not as good but you did great! i voted for you and i really hope you win x

Aww thank you so much :,] I really really appreciate it

I read yours and it's amazing! If you ever write more stuff, I'd love to read it :D