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Lurking by Deidre
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The frozen lake cracked beneath his feet.  But how? The ice was thick and with the colder days and nights it was frozen solid a few feet deep.  He took another step forward and did not hear another cracking sound, so he cautiously moved along. After a few more steps, he heard another crack with a bit of a vibration that shook through him. Getting down on his hands and knees and falling slowly into a flat position on his stomach to even out his weight upon the ice, he decided to crawl back the quarter of a mile he had already endured in the darkness. The winter weather had a cold to it, that he could feel on his face bare to the elements, but he was a tough guy who lived in this area for the last fifty years of his life and he was used to it. With the lamp light on his toque dimming as he forgot to replace the batteries that morning, he could see enough of the ice in front of him and the crack forming. It was coming up from the bottom and it had volume to it in width. Something he had never witnessed before and it confused him. 

   With all the stories of a few disappearances in this particular lake, he didn't want to be one of them and just wanted to get home from a long twelve hour day at work. After all it was his day off tomorrow and he wanted to enjoy it ice skating on this lake with his three teen kids, so it was good that he was sort of testing this out now, he thought to himself, bringing confidence to the fear that was dwelling inside of him.  At this part of the lake he knew it was two hundred feet deep as he fished it in the summer times. He would sink fast if he went through the ice and drown, but what worried him more was, would they find his body? They didn't find the bodies of those that drowned, even though their drownings were witnessed by others. Where did the bodies go?

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The Decision by marialena.r
CompleteFantasy
107-000

A man attempts to end his life in a frozen lake, only to be snatched by and come face-to-face with a sprite living within the depths of the lake. This encounter will make them both reevaluate what they take for granted and lead to a difficult decision.

Under the Ice by Nicoleta
87-000

A man had an accident in the local frozen lake, finding a tragic frozen death. However a young detective isn't so sure this death was an accident.

The Harvest by AliciaInWonderland
23-000

A young man dreams of launching his career as a famed detective by solving the mystery of a missing woman. He soon finds himself embroiled in a more sinister endeavour than he bargained on.

The real killer by jessl869
CompleteMatureMystery
14-000

A drunken man regrets his life decisions. He is forced to bear the lonely life of a shadow as he stands on a frozen lake.

Tears under the bridge - Part 2 by missypfeathers
56-000

As Missy grapples with the grief from losing her lover to suicide, she went into a downward spiral that landed her on a frozen lake.

Nothing Ever Stays Dead by zoobi4everr
844/5 (2)040

They always say that dreams come true, but forget to mention nightmares are dreams too.

Laurel by ParisC
1424/5 (2)021

The Mistress of the Ice, as she was known in East End. A true local of New York. It's where all her stories unfolded. 


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Soulmates by I-Was-Told-There-Would-Be-Horses
434/5 (1)010

Despite all the odds stacked against him, a man sets out to find his missing horse. When he finally finds her, nature fights against them. Will they make it out of the valley?

Winter Crossing by Bluebirdxx
2624/5 (1)010

An outing for wild game turns into a lesson learned for a young boy. But there is more to the lake near their home than meets the eye.

Koa’s Calling by Windbunny
23-000

A boy must survive his first hunt and find his place among his tribe.

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