Over the month of November, Novelo is inviting authors to submit short stories to this month's challenge. Every month we will be hosting a writing challenge. For the month of November, we invite you to write a story that that starts with "The frozen lake cracked beneath his feet." As with anything you write on Novelo, you will keep the rights to the story you submit to this challenge however we reserve the right to use parts of it (such as cover, blurb, etc) to promote Novelo on our social media accounts.

November Challenge - "The frozen lake cracked beneath his feet."

Max's Revenge

Ghost Hunter

The Ice cracked beneath his feet

The Visit

Beneath the Ice 

The Lost City of Valor

The Frozen lake.

Eben

The Chosen one

The Frozen Lake Fiasco

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“Cup of Tea”

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Rikki rozalez

The King of Beasts 

Natja Denk

Listen to the Lady of the Lake

Great job in every aspect ... tension, good verbal footwork, contemporary link, and some fists flying.  

Echoes in the Cold

Touching, but how did the mother bear suddenly come from the depths? Is she a dedicated apnoe diver? Well, still a nice story ... 

Cracked

Okay, this is another script that has been recycled (as so very many here), but at least this is halfway interesting despite the horrible interpunction and general low readability. Keep going, but be a tad more thorough at proof-reading and thus gentler to your reader, please. 

Breaking the ice

Impressive! I am no ice-skater, but a former ballet dancer, and I must say the depiction of the moves and general physics is spot-on. You can almost feel how you dance on ice yourself. Cheers to the author!

P.S. There are some typos.

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Writing Discussion

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Challenges/Competitions

David Yip

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Introduce Yourself

Cathy Ruka

C@thy_the_cre8r 

caterina

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Reviews

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Review & feedback request

Shyanne Ordiway

Introduction

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The Huntress : The Alterealm Series Book 1

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Where Destiny Called Us and Tore Us Apart

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Yokai

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The Upcoming Donna: Liliana

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Heart : Book 1 Animal Senses Series

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Dream of the Guardians I-1: Rising

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Hunter

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Under the Abyss

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The Dove and the Letter

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Scent : Book 2 Animal Senses Series